Tuesday, March 25, 2008

THE OTHER FANFICT SITES

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Lost Memory

This Fan-Fiction is based on Walt Disney pictures in 1995. This story is about a bunch of toys in a 9 year old boy's room named Andy and all the toys are trying to explore the adventure of sneaking out of the house for freedom. This is my first Fan-Fiction and I hope you enjoy this story.

"Hey! Woody wake up! wake up!" shouted by little green solider in a frantic voice.

Woody is trying to open his eyes, but he's feeling so tired he can barely open them. The little green solider is continuously shaking Woody. Finally, Woody sits up on the ground in Andy's room, Woody rubs his eyes and is trying to figure out where this place is and what is going on and why this stupid little green figure is talking to him. So many questions pop up into his head, so Woody decides to talk with the little green solider.

" um, where am I and why are you calling me Woody ? my name is not Woody, thats a gay name
!!" Woody think he must be going crazy talking with these toys.

" We're in a ruthless human being named Andy's house, Sir !" the little green solider answered in a military styled way.

" What are you talking about? why can you speak English and I'm a human being as well !" Woody asked with a polite smile.

Little green solider laughed out loud and said " Ask yourself Woody, we are toys we're all the same, except I am green. So please don't ask me questions that I don't know the answers to.

" Fine, I will search the answer by myself" Woody shouted!

Mean while Woody saw himself in the mirror and he was shocked by what he saw. He saw a 15cm tall cowboy statue with an oversize hilarious cowboy hat on and super tide blue jeans. Woody is confused and scared about what he saw. Last night he was drinking in the bar with his best friend Shane and the next day been woken up by toys in a stranger's room...........and becoming a cowboy toy statue.....so lame! The one thought in Woody's mind is " How to become a human again "

" BOOM " one big explosive sound. " Hey everyone ! Are you ready to fight for your freedom yet?" Buzz light year said with an energetic voice.

" What freedom? Look at you, you are just a plastic robot toy. Please tell me about your strategy then!!" Woody shouted with an angry and hopeless voice.

Everyone was so silent after Woody shouted, Maybe it was because they had realized that Woody may have been telling the truth.

" Son~calm down, you are not the only one who wants to get out of this room, son~let me tell you a story." Mr. Potato head said.

Once upon a time, A 25 year old young man named Richard has found a historical comic book from his grand mum's room called " Toy story"
This book's cover is pretty worn-out, but still in a good condition and printed in color.
Richard opened the first page and started reading. the first page described a cowboy toy figure who rode a brown plastic horse in a kid's room with luxury stars and planet's wallpaper.
While Richard was checking out cowboy's clothing, suddenly cowboy blinks at him.

"What the hell was that, I think I need to have some rest." Richard rubs his eyes and said to himself.

"Suddenly, Richard hears horse screaming............now he is getting confused and worried. Where does that sound came from?? and he is in a room with no window and its 14th floor apartment!!" Mr. Potato head said with a horrifying voice.

" And~~what happen??" Asked Woody. By the same time door is opened by Andy and all the toys become "toys", no one blinks or moves................to be continued .

A Whole New World

The Clean up, Andy Grows Up

And so the story goes...
Young Andy has just passed his entrance exams to University, bags himself a girl and is moving out. Ah finally sweet 18...
Andy clears his room, of all his junk, including his childhood toys.

"oh no did you hear that, exclaims woody, as he frantically flails his whimpy arms around in the air."

WILL THE TOYS HAVE TO FEND FOR THEMSELVES??? DUM DUM DUM~~~~~~~~



The Great Struggle

Chapter 1

March 3rd, it was spring, and a start of a new year. Andy had decided to throw out his toys once and for all.
- Woody is greatly saddened by this event, along with all the other toys in the hood.
As Andy reaches around his room putting all his once loved toys into a box, the toys are figuring out what they are going to do. -Buzz has a plan, he suggests they look for the nearest pawn shop so they maybe one day be owned again, however the dangers of reaching that shop and also the risks of making the great journey.

Night fall draws swiftly, the toys are disposed of outside. Not a sound to be heard except the chirping of crickets.

Woody begins with a question, “so what’s the plan?” Buzz replies “to the pawn shop, but how?”

Woody is not happy with such a decision, as he would like to return to the house, unknowingly to the rest Woody wants to rebel, strange but true the rope swinging cowboy makes his moves.
He sees his opportunity, woody jumps in with a hi-jump kick Buzz dodges woody keeps flying and crashes… Buzz knows Woody is scared, and yells to him “stop! This is the best way to go about, Andy obviously doesn’t want us around anymore and we have to accept and move on.”

Finally Woody realized that Andy has been changing, and maybe for the best. He is swiftly comforted by Mr. Potato along with Slinky. Once this dispute was settled the plan was to find the way to a pawn shop. “But where is it? Buzz?” Asks Woody. Buzz replies, I have a great idea let’s find a map!

Suddenly! The neighbor’s dog spots them, it start barking as it runs their way! There’s only one way to escape and that’s down the drain! The toys make a break, only 5 meters away! Down the hole they go, falling into the darkness. Thud~! Is everyone ok says Buzz. Mumbling to himself, how to get out now… from the left of him Bo-peep yells “ molest!” everyone is drawn to her,
she screams again, someone is grabbing her, lights turn on and they find themselves all surrounded, but by what?

An army of toys, riding rats as horses?

- Strange for our heroes to find a new civilization of abandoned toys underground~

UNKNOWN VOICE - “Who goes there?” Buzz is in a state of shock, as nails are pointed at him and the others around. The toy in charge gets of his rat. “He asks who are you. Where do you come from? Speak!” Buzz replies “I am buzz light year of star command and who may you be?”. The unknown toy walks into the light, “at ease men these toys don’t pose any harm”. I am sonic the hedgehog of the freedom fighters… a once loved toy but lost in action. What brings you down to these lands? Have you been sent to aid us in our struggle against the vermin which lie within?” Buzz then replies with a puzzled face, “um where’s the exit?” sonic points down the river. Woody scared as usual then jumps in asking “what about the vermin? What do they do?” sonic replies, “sadly my fellow toys have been taken captive, one by one they disappear where they go I don’t know, I hear they tear you apart limb at a time.”

Quickly! Shouts sonic “we must move, before we are found.” The toys journey down the strange tunnels alongside their new friend’s, what lies ahead who knows? Is it danger? Or perhaps safe haven?

Hours later our heroes find themselves at a metropolis of what seem to be lost toys, a city bustling with toys in fact. Welcome new friends they shout as they walk down the roads, by this time Buzz has forgotten about the pawn shop and is caught in total amazement. Out of a sudden the city is attacked, huge rats bust in through city walls. “Battle stations” cries the voice of many toys, as everyone scuttles about. “So this is the vermin you talk of?” exclaims Woody? “Damn straight!” Yells sonic as he takes aim with a nail gun. The other toys are scared and paralyzed with fear, then from nowhere bo-peep is taken, into the darkness in the mouth of 1 of the vermin, WOOOOOODY yells peep, Woody tries to pursue but Buzz grabs him “no u must not! It’s dangerous!” Woody is enraged, he grabs Sonic and shakes him “How do I find her what must I do? Most importantly where do I sign up??” sonic grins , the other toys are over whelmed by their recent loss.

What is going to happen next? What can Woody do to find his peep? Can Buzz find their way out of this mess?

Stay tuned for the next episode of Toy Story Cronicles!


Cast Away


Chunk Noland is on the deserted island alone, wandering from place to place. There is no one around at all on the island. After construction of the raft and the wind begins to blow the way he goes he realises it’s time to sail. As he sails, the wave is getting bigger and bigger. Finally, a mountain of a wave is about to overtake him.
Chuck : Here we go, Wilson! Hold it tight!!
Wilson : ( … )
Chuck : Wilson! (He suddenly jumped out of bed, panting. He was sweating. It was a nightmare)
The hands of the watch stood at three. Few days have passed after Chuck was rescued. He kept failing to get to sleep these days. He was having the same nightmare over and over again everyday. He felt like he was still living in that island. Chuck was in a fragile mental state, feeling so lonely. It’s very painful. He was now unaccustomed to this kind of life which was normal. Chuck opened the drawer and picked up something. On his hand, it was the pocketwatch with Kelly’s picture. Then, he went back to sleep with the picture in his hand.

Next morning, there was a celebration by his friends for Chuck being back alive. It was their first meeting in four years. Chuck stepped in. At first, they were just gazing blankly at him with a shock. It was absolutely great to have him back but also was shocking to see someone who they thought was dead is really quite alive. They were all stunned by his reappearance after years. All eyes were turned upon him and Chuck looked uncomfortable.
Friend : Chunk, look at you. Where the hell have you been so far (almost crying) Oh my god, I can not believe you are back. How great to see you. (hugging Chuck)
Chuck : yeah.. It’s great… really …

Chuck and his friends talked about this and that. They had really great time and everything seemed going back to normal for Chuck but there is one thing that he has been missing at that time. This talking and laughing with friends reminded him of his beloved friend.
Chuck : (Wilson …)
Still, he couldn't help remembering Wilson that he had lost. Just then, one of his friends mentioned about Kelly. Chuck was trying to listen carefully and asked
Chuck : Have you got any news from Kelly?? Tell me everything you know about her.Friend : Well, I.. I don't know. She probably thinks you are dead. well, that's obvious isn't it? Why don't you call her. I will give you the number. Maybe she is still alone and you guys will have chance to get back together. Who knows?? (smile and laughs)Chuck : ...
Chuck immediately rushed out of the restaurant and got into the phone booth, holding the phone but hesitated for a moment. A couple of hours later, he was still hesitating but soon dialed the number.

Kelly : Hello?, Kelly Frears speaking.
Chuck : ...
Kelly : Hello? Who's this? Hey, if you ...
The 3rd person : Hey honey what's the matter? Who's that you speaking to?
(Chuck frowning)
Kelly : I don't know. Someone has called and is not answering. This is weird.
The 3rd person : That must be the wrong number. Don't worry. Just cut off.
Kelly : yeah…
(Chuck cuts off the phone first)

Chuck was disappointed at the fact that she’s been with someone else since he was missing. He was standing around like a fool for a while... to be continued...

Monday, March 24, 2008

Toy Story - Woody's Betrayal, Scene 1 & 2 (directors script)

Toy Story - Woody's Betrayal



Plot summary:
buzz betrays woody by de-flowering his precious bo-peep
Thus causing a divide between the toys; woody's side and Buzz' side.

Andy gets caught in the cross-fire and has to find a way to re-unite his toys
his room is quickly becoming a battle zone.


Toy Story – Woody’s Betrayal (director’s script)


Scene one:

Mr potato head whispers to Rex:

“I heard that Buzz has been going to ‘infinity and beyond’ with bo-peep!”

Rex: (looking up from his magnadoodle) “No Way!”

Mr Potato head: (ear falls off) “sorry t-that happens sometimes.”

Rex: (still in disbelief looks slowly towards mr potato head) “No Waay”

Enter Mrs Potato Head: “I've always suggested he get it glued on, but apart from that he never really had a set of ears that would listen to me - what’s all this nonsense about our beloved buzz?”

Other toys start to gather:

Mr Potato head: “It’s nothing dear, we were just having a man to man talk”

Slinky: concertinas down from a desk to the floor, “Woody…? Woody…?”

“Has anyone seen woody?”

More and more toys start to assemble, (hushed chatter)

Potato head: (his excited tone changing into a more concerned one)

“Rex did woody tell you where he was going today”

Rex: “err, he said he was going with Andy on ‘important business’ somewhere”

Mrs Potato head: (distant gunfire) “Here, Woody will be back soon, (to mr potato head) why don’t you make yourself useful and get those soldiers to stop practising their drills near the dolls’ house, they’re causing holiday home Barbie a great deal of strife.”

Mr Potato head Grumbles:

“Oh, that broad…All she does is sit in her Jacuzzi all day, I don’t see why I have to go and- (saunters off mumbling to himself)

Bo-Peep emerges from under Andy’s bed, and walks over to where all the other toys are gathered.

(Adjusts her hair ribbon) “What seems to be the matter?”

Mrs Potato head is mildly surprised to see bo-peep

“Weren’t you meant to be tending to your heard Bo? Anyway, we’ve been waiting for woody all this time, and no sign…

Bo-peep: “he hasn’t come back yet?”

(Slinky walks the front half of his body over to where bo-peep is standing)

“No bo he hasn’t…not yet, I hope he’s ok.... woody…if anything’s-”

Rex suddenly drops his magnadoodle stylus

Dinosaur: (gazes up at the gigantic window sill as if hoping to see woody there)

“Say Slinky, Why the long face?” (Buzz strolls over from near Andy’s bedside table)

(Slinky happy to see buzz) “Buzz!! Where have you been??

(Buzz’s eyes shoot from left to right for a brief moment) “Err…hah! I was checking my laser for malfunctions. You never know how many nasty toys could be in this neighbourhood… (Looks over to the closet) “Aah I see the boys are practising their drills again.”

Mrs Potato head: “deary me, your face is a mess”

Mr Potato head: “I told them to stop shoot- (he sees Buzz standing talking to slinky)

“Err, Buzz… h-have you seen woody?”

(Buzz is patting slinky on the head - he looks up)

“I haven’t seen Woody since yesterday, but he’s a big cowboy there isn’t a person in this galaxy that can beat him!”

Bo-Peep: “Buzz, you know woody isn’t a fighter”

“Well, he’s got the brains to conquer any highly intelligent life-form this side of the Milky Way”

Mr potato head: “yea and I suppose now would be the right time to say something like “to infinity and beyond…”

(Chuckles to himself but quickly stops as buzz aims his wrist laser directly at him)

“On my planet ‘mashed potato’ was a popular dish”

Bo-peep puts her hand out to lower buzz’ arm.

“Buzz, stop being silly”

(Buzz chuckles)

“I’m not as silly as you were last-”

“I-I should tend to my sheep.”

(Bo Peep turns to buzz as she’s walking away – cold hard stare)

Scene two:

Later on that evening:

Andy’s doorknob starts to move, and the door creeks open slowly

(The soldiers - the only toys awake, watch intently from their posts)

“Stay still men, Andy’s home” (brief radio static)

Andy slips into the room, turns before shutting the door “g’nite mom”

He places woody down on his bed, before slumping down face up on the bed.

“I wonder if she likes me Woody…”

Woody remains perfectly still at the foot of the bed.

Soldier to commander: “Andy’s asleep sir”

“Ok very good sergeant, send out the word”

“Roger that sir”

(Radio chatter)

The toys start to emerge from closets, toy boxes, from under the bed, and all sorts of nooks and crannies.

Woody taps the microphone on the kid’s tape recorder.

“Hi everyone, I’d like to make an announcement. I have been away with Andy and…

Rex: (stomps over from against the wall)

“But where did you go Woody?”

“I was at Janey’s house playing with Andy and Janey’s Toys. But that’s not important now. Andy likes Janey…”

Slinky: “But we knew that woody!”

Woody: “Not in that way Slinky, there are other ways people can like each other”

Slinky” “oh…

Woody looks out over the crowds of toys, and notices that one toy in particular is missing.

(Woody bends down and whispers to Slinky) “Where’s buzz? He should be here”

Slinky: (looking around) “I don’t know woody he never missed a meeting before”

The toys are anxiously waiting for Woody to readdress them.

Mr Potato head whispers to Mrs Potato head “bo-peep isn’t around either...”

Woody: “OK everyone meeting’s over!”

One of the toys: “already? Geez get us gathered here especially and then just waste our time”

Woody then goes off to find out where buzz and bo-peep are.

(Toys are still standing around confused)

Woody looks under the bed, he hears shouting coming from an old toy box.

Woody realises that the shouting isn’t someone in trouble, but someone writhing in ecstasy –

His beloved Bo beep.

Woody: Buzz, what are you...?

Bo-peep, “Woody!”

Buzz: “ah- woody I...”

Woody: “don’t bother Buzz...”

Woody slumps away. He walks past all the other toys and as they approach him, he waves them away.

Woody: (To himself) “How could he.... Buzz…. My Bo-peep.”

Sin city colosseum

This is a fanfiction based on the character Marv form Sin City as a Roman gladiator



The Colosseum.

A lone warrior stands in its centre.

The crowds screaming his name.

He looks up at all the kill thirsty fans turning to see the whole crowd there chants make his blood pump with excitement for the battle to come.

Then the challenger's door to the arena opens 5 men not nearly as big as he enter, some with axes, some with swords, some with spears, all look pale and terrified of facing the most fearsome and blood thirsty killer the Colosseum has ever seen.

A tiny smile creeps across his face as the men approach him carefully, slowly making a circle around him thinking they have a better chance of survival,

But in the back of their minds they know as he does everyone of them will die under the deafening sound of the crowd chanting his name.....

Marvian.... Marvian..... Marvian..... Marvian.... Marvian....

As Marv stands there basking in the crowd's crooning he thinks to himself "always hated that name always preferred Marv, If they are gonna shout my name at least they could get it right".

Then in a blink of an eye the battle begins.

The nervous young gladiator directly to Marv's 6 o'clock gives a feeble war cry and rushes in to attack Marv with his back turned.

It was a foolish mistake and the last one that this young man will ever make, with his own voice blaring in his ears the young man thrusts his spear aiming for the back of Marv's head.

It almost hits mark, Marv turns just time to deflect the spear blow with his shield, and in one swift movement splits the man in two, his massive double bladed axe slices the young man right down the middle like a hot knife though butter.

The crowd goes wild.

Marv thinks to himself "that was close, don't have time to be daydreaming listening to the crowd, maybe I'm gettin a lil cocky".

Four are left now, the hasty actions of the first man make the rest of the gladiators revise the situation they are in, they start attacking two at a time, the warrior to Marv's 3 o'clock and his 9 both rush him, both have big shields and swords.

Marv See's them approach out of the corner of his eye, now snapped out of his daydream by the near miss of the first young gladiator and in full battle mode, he flashes a quick smile and easily blocks the sword coming at his head from the right with his axe, while at the same time smashing the bottom edge of his massive square shield into the face of the man coming in form his left.

The blow almost takes the top half of the mans head off and sends him flying to the hard coliseum earth.

Marv turns his attention back to the man on the right whose dropped his guard after witnessing the ease in which Marv has dispatched his comrade.

Marv See's the opening instantly and fakes overhead blow with his axe, the man quickly raises his shield above his head to block the blow, but Marv rolls his shoulder backwards and sends the colossal weapon flying up underneath the man slicing through his groin and stopping at the top of his ribcage.

A quick kick dislodges the axe from the poor dead gladiators chest right in time to engage the last two warriors left standing, who are now rushing in from the front of him.

One has a spear one has a sword both have shields.

The gladiator with the spear thrusts it at Marv's feet forcing him to block low while the man with the sword swings desperately for Marv's neck.

A thought out attack, but in the carnage that they have witnessed not a very well thought out attack, in their desperate attempt to to stay alive they failed to take into account the fact that Marv's axe is at least a foot longer than the man's sword.

Marv cuts his arm off at the shoulder before the sword can even get to close to his neck, the sword and the arm fly past Marv's face, and with a quick flick of his wrist he sends the gladiator's head flying as well.

Now only one remains.

Marv seeing the last one only has a spear and playing up to the crowd decides to drop his axe and shield taking the last one on with his bare hands.

Its just as easy for this champion of the Colosseum to kill him with his hands as it would be with an axe.

The crowd loves it and send up a massive roar for a man that seems invincible.

As Marv bores down on the man with a huge grin on his face, the gladiator panics and fires a careless thrust at Marv's midsection, Marv grabs the spear and tears it from the mans grasp, still approaching slowly now with an even bigger smile, in his last desperate attempt to stay alive the gladiator hits Marv with his shield.

Marv just laughs and grabs the man by the neck with one hand lifting him easily over his head.

The crowd erupts once more, this time with a chant of...

FINISH HIM... FINISH HIM... FINISH HIM... FINISH HIM

Marv happy to oblige starts tightening his grasp on the mans neck, squeezing until he hears the bones between his monstrous hands snap like a twig, terminating the last of the five men sent to entertain the throngs of Rome by pitting them against a man they had no hope of defeating.

Lost again in the booming noise of the Colosseum Marv thinks to himself

"This was all to easy, those boys should never have been put up against me even if there was five of 'em, when will i ever get the fight Ive been waitin my whole life for, against a real warrior not hordes of these little punks"

Before he can answer his own question the challengers door to the arena opens for the second time.

The sound grabs his attention back to the Colosseum and he realises hes still holding the last dead gladiator above his head, hurling the man to the ground he looks toward the door and See's a gargantuan warrior standing a good head and shoulders over Marv and almost twice as wide.

Marv picks up his axe and shield ready for battle once again, and speaks to himself as the man mountain approaches

"There's no daydreaming this time, no time to make a mistake, this guy's as big as a rhino and that war hammer hes holdin could end me in one blow, you better be worth it big boy gettin me all excited, im ready for a real fight so don't you disappoint"

As the huge Challenger approaches the crowd begins to chant his name again.

MARVIAN... MARVIAN... MARVIAN... MARVIAN.

Tuesday, March 11, 2008