This Fan-Fiction is based on Walt Disney pictures in 1995. This story is about a bunch of toys in a 9 year old boy's room named Andy and all the toys are trying to explore the adventure of sneaking out of the house for freedom. This is my first Fan-Fiction and I hope you enjoy this story.
"Hey! Woody wake up! wake up!" shouted by little green solider in a frantic voice.
Woody is trying to open his eyes, but he's feeling so tired he can barely open them. The little green solider is continuously shaking Woody. Finally, Woody sits up on the ground in Andy's room, Woody rubs his eyes and is trying to figure out where this place is and what is going on and why this stupid little green figure is talking to him. So many questions pop up into his head, so Woody decides to talk with the little green solider.
" um, where am I and why are you calling me Woody ? my name is not Woody, thats a gay name
!!" Woody think he must be going crazy talking with these toys.
" We're in a ruthless human being named Andy's house, Sir !" the little green solider answered in a military styled way.
" What are you talking about? why can you speak English and I'm a human being as well !" Woody asked with a polite smile.
Little green solider laughed out loud and said " Ask yourself Woody, we are toys we're all the same, except I am green. So please don't ask me questions that I don't know the answers to.
" Fine, I will search the answer by myself" Woody shouted!
Mean while Woody saw himself in the mirror and he was shocked by what he saw. He saw a 15cm tall cowboy statue with an oversize hilarious cowboy hat on and super tide blue jeans. Woody is confused and scared about what he saw. Last night he was drinking in the bar with his best friend Shane and the next day been woken up by toys in a stranger's room...........and becoming a cowboy toy statue.....so lame! The one thought in Woody's mind is " How to become a human again "
" BOOM " one big explosive sound. " Hey everyone ! Are you ready to fight for your freedom yet?" Buzz light year said with an energetic voice.
" What freedom? Look at you, you are just a plastic robot toy. Please tell me about your strategy then!!" Woody shouted with an angry and hopeless voice.
Everyone was so silent after Woody shouted, Maybe it was because they had realized that Woody may have been telling the truth.
" Son~calm down, you are not the only one who wants to get out of this room, son~let me tell you a story." Mr. Potato head said.
Once upon a time, A 25 year old young man named Richard has found a historical comic book from his grand mum's room called " Toy story"
This book's cover is pretty worn-out, but still in a good condition and printed in color.
Richard opened the first page and started reading. the first page described a cowboy toy figure who rode a brown plastic horse in a kid's room with luxury stars and planet's wallpaper.
While Richard was checking out cowboy's clothing, suddenly cowboy blinks at him.
"What the hell was that, I think I need to have some rest." Richard rubs his eyes and said to himself.
"Suddenly, Richard hears horse screaming............now he is getting confused and worried. Where does that sound came from?? and he is in a room with no window and its 14th floor apartment!!" Mr. Potato head said with a horrifying voice.
" And~~what happen??" Asked Woody. By the same time door is opened by Andy and all the toys become "toys", no one blinks or moves................to be continued .
6 comments:
Nice twist on toy story, woody being human then suddenly turned into a toy and trying to find a way to be human again. I look forward to reading what comes next if there is any follow up. I thought it was good story but a little hard to read with the way it was set out and there was a few grammatical mistakes which also contributed. But that aside it was an awesome first attempt you should definitely keep on with this story in the future.
nice fan fict Frank, would be good to see the continuation of this. I like how you have given woody's character a human mindset with the sceptism and sarcasm that go along with being human. So woody wants to go back to being human? I wonder how he would go in search of the answers to his questions, would he seek out a toy maker or possibly even a sorcerer to change him back?
An interesting thought would be that, if he remained in "toy form" for a while, would he still end up wanting to change back into a human...
interesting character development :)
As far as structure and content goes,
I thought your word choice was a bit formal in places, In casual conversation words like "strategy" might seem a little strange.
only a few minor errors in grammar etc, nice work!
what an interesting story, i like the concept how woody gets drunk and when he wakes up hes a toy, however i understand hes feeling quite bewildered that hes a toy all of a sudden. my opinion is he starts off tryin to find a way to become human again but slowly starts to like being a toy. this is slightly cliche.
woody is a interesting character , how he seems so hot headed and up himself, maybe if he listened to the toys he might learn something. he thinks the toys are all stupid and just plastic but wat he doesnt know that they have a plan, maybe a plan to try get him out of the body, though the toys think hes insane.
all up interesting concepts, i feel that it maybe predictable if you continue writing on, but maybe you have better ideas , to twist the story. good job though
Tamashi - a great start although I get a bit lost in a few places in the narrative - could be something to do with the constant shift between the past and present tenses. Could be good to be consistent here. The past tense gives a more traditional completed narrative feel - while the present tense give a greater sense of urgency as if the narrative is happening now.
I think you should take the excellent comments of your group memebers on board and write another chapter - how does Woody develop as an individual as he interacts with the world of the toys . . . admittedly a little cliched - but I'm sure you would give it an interesting angle.
What an interesting story!! It's so cool i like the part that Woody's got different style from the original one. plz keep posting and i'll be looking forward to read next one.
very interesting story, good start so keep the journey going.
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